Multiplicity of ME

Photo Critique 1

    First thing I thought of was this is not a unique picture, I have seen a lot of pictures like this with rainbows but I must say it is nice. This picture is really dark though and feel that it could use light. I really notice how the rainbow reflects onto the top of the rocks which I don’t know is a good thing or a bad thing but I’m not really like it cause it makes the rainbow look brighter then what it is. I like how the end of the rainbow is brighter then the rest of it and wish that the whole rainbow were that bright.

    One thing I think that would really help this picture is the de-centered horizon line, if it was either centered or blended better with the ocean, it would be 100 times better. Another thing that would be better, if possible, is have the photographer back up and either get more the cliff or ocean and bring the main focus which is the rainbow to either more of right picture or left picture.

    All in all this is a good picture that to me needs some improvement to become a great unique picture.

With some of the improvments.

5 Self Portraits

Same Thing, Different Place



Halloween Post

Picture Story

     Teaching the little kids how to stretch, or building an army?? Me and my special partner Molly, snuck down to the gym one afternoon and found the elementary gym teacher Mr. Nelson with the little kids. When we asked him what he was doing he was resistant to tell us but then said teaching them to stretch. But why would little kids need to stretch?? When the high school gym teacher Mr. Flood found his way down to the gym he wondered why Mr. Nelson was in the gym, we told Mr. Flood what Mr. Nelson told us and he said that Mr. Nelson should not have a class this hour. Molly and I found ourselves confused. We then started to think, why were there kids from second grade and also from sixth. We also found it weird that he talked quite when we got down there and kept looking back at us. We had to investigate more! They next day we went down there at the same time and saw even more children and heard Mr. Nelson screaming demands at the kids and scream "We will take them down!" While trying to take my camera out a little kid saw me and told Mr. Nelson, Molly and I ran out of there like bats outta h***! So you be the judge, teaching the kids to stretch or building a child army?!

2nd Halloween Post